Really nice job!! That was your first short film??? You need to get bizzy making a feature film. You have a unique style, and a syntax that works well for the horror genre. This film looks like a polished professional piece. Your ready for the big TIME. At the very least you could make a living making films. Wow! Really good. I actually got scared. Good thing I watched this in the daytime. Really well done. This is one of the most interesting pieces I've seen posted on this forum. No so much for the story, which doesn't really go anywhere. But the framing, the editing, the continued use of close ups, the camera moves, the dutch angle in the door way, it all added up to an actual style that I found very appealing. I liked the bold use of darkness to, not scared for the picture to be really dark, even if the actual look needs work. The sound was very good as well. I peed a little.